I am not for your revolution
nor can I stand aside
and let the world pass me by
and watch it from behind
I am not for your NOISE pollution
your murmurs and your cries
you speak of vice and fraud as well
and many many lies
I CANnot throw it all away
I cannot let it be
nor do I want to follow you
I want to follow ME
You speak of change no you DEMAND
yet all you do is talk
who is it then that you believe
will have to walk the walk?!
I am not FOR your revolution
I cannot STAND your noise pollution
the change that you demand
Wake up my friends and face the world
just do it hand in hand
Or better yet go back to BED
and dream of better days
change may come, one day, that is
long after you've been dead
*someone is in a good mood today.....
aha aha good mood indeed.... gooooood morning yawarakai... i'm not getting much sleep with baby froglet.. lol..
ReplyDeleteYou speak of change no you DEMAND
ReplyDeleteyet all you do is talk
who is it then that you believe
will have to walk the walk?!
That's my fave part:)
Froggggy, please please send new pics of your beautiful little boy.. mashallah mashallah..
ReplyDeleteanamethystworld, thank you very much, i appreciate that :)
Loved it! The whole feeling faj2a 5alany at7mas ma3 nafsy! ANARCHY YEAH BABY lol
ReplyDeleteThe beginning is perfect but then at the last two verses the rhyme was a bit rocky but all in all good job ;)
thanx for that bassem.. i know what u mean,, i just got lazy towards the end! lol
ReplyDeleteOr better yet go back to BED
ReplyDeleteand dream of better days
Liked that line the best!
Awesome! I could feel the anger.
thanx rawr, i was very frustrated at the time!
ReplyDeletei like it when u said:
ReplyDeleteim not ur noise pollution
ur murmers and cries
creative :D i like it when ppl use metaphors in their poems..
Love it!!
ReplyDeletethank you kryptonite and his sweetheart :)
ReplyDeleteGREAT GO GO GO YOU WILL REACH THERE.
ReplyDeleteOH YES THERE.